Saturday, September 25, 2010

WOD - First session

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The system is The World of Darkness
WOD - Travis + Sasha - First session
Second video is the synopsis and a brief description of the game system. -Thanks to Ganturo

3 comments:

  1. My suggestions as Feedback:

    Speak Louder. Your volume is notably quiet and later on down the line if you stay quiet you might get too quiet. To the point you say something but we have to rewind just to listen again. Might be something to look into.

    More Detail. I wasn't there at the game. Maybe tell us more? What did the game include? What is WOD in a short description for those that haven't had a chance to run it? Give us some insight into the content of the games you run and the players you interact with. Let us know the whole story and not just the conditions of time and setup. Please?

    Thank you.

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  2. Travis hired her because everyone else kept getting too distracted by his prettiness to get any work done. Obviously.

    Magical disappearing headphones = win.

    The retelling was a little jumbled -- alright, more than a little -- I wasn't entirely sure what the story was or why anybody was doing anything. You mentioned that the voice on the cell phone told Travis about the job, but you didn't tell us until later what he was actually told -- I think it'd be better if the viewer was informed of things in the same sort of sequence that the players were, so things unfold in a way that makes some narrative sense. Describing Travis' character right off worked well, but you didn't spend a lot of time talking about the world until suddenly we're told about a 'body modification'shop.

    ...Then again, you might just be approaching this more as a summary of events than as anything resembling a narrative. I don't know. >>

    I do think this'd be more entertaining as a 'storytelling hour' sort of thing, though. If that makes sense.

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